“Spring has
returned. The Earth is like a child that knows poems.” - Rainer Maria Rilke
For this week’s ‘Midweek Motif’, Poets United explores the topic, ‘The Song of a Single Word’. The challenge to participants is: “Choose a word which sings to you. Write a poem from its lyrics – or write a lyrical poem in answer to it.” My word is ‘Celandine’, which I think is a beautiful sounding word describing two different flowers (Chelidonium majus and Ficaria verna), both a sunny yellow colour. My poem below:
For this week’s ‘Midweek Motif’, Poets United explores the topic, ‘The Song of a Single Word’. The challenge to participants is: “Choose a word which sings to you. Write a poem from its lyrics – or write a lyrical poem in answer to it.” My word is ‘Celandine’, which I think is a beautiful sounding word describing two different flowers (Chelidonium majus and Ficaria verna), both a sunny yellow colour. My poem below:
Celandine
The longer days
of warming breezes
Are days like
draughts of heady wine;
No more the icy
Winter freezes –
Now blooms the
yellow celandine.
The cellar door
will open wide,
The sun will
heat the greening vine;
As hands in
labour useful guide,
Smiles happily
the golden celandine.
The swallows
build their nests
And ondines
sport in seaside brine;
Hearts faster
beat, with cupid’s jests,
While blossoms
sunny celandine.
I feel my
quickened pulse and try
To utter now to
the love of mine:
“You are my sun
and apple of my eye,
You are my
blonden celandine…”
similar in color to the butter cups - we used to hold them to our chins to show a bit of sunshine - i wonder if your love would know the word, but being compared to the sun - i think just might get you a long ways -- in love.
ReplyDeleteLove the passion of this...it has a classic love poem feel to it...your opening quote is wonderful as well...thank you!
ReplyDeleteA very romantic poem that fits perfectly to establish a mood.
ReplyDeleteAs sunny, warm and beautiful as the flower described. Very lovely.
ReplyDeleteSo warm, the sun of love. I enjoyed reading this so much. A beautiful song.
ReplyDeleteThis was overflowing with gorgeous, sumptuous lyricism. Beautiful!
ReplyDeletein winter it feels so warm to dream of such sunny flowers...beautifully rhythmic..
ReplyDeleteLovely piece, Nicholas. Captures the warmth of love and the season, compared contrasted wonderfully.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautifully lyrical piece Nicholas :D
ReplyDelete"Hearts faster beat, with cupid’s jests,
ReplyDeleteWhile blossoms sunny celandine."
How can I not think of Puck, searching for and playing with the magical flower?! The song is worthy of its arrival and all it brings.
This has a lovely, ballad-y feel, and I adore the last line.
ReplyDeleteOh I love that you chose such a lovely spring flower....and such a lyrical, romantic ode!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
What a beautiful poem, Nicholas, and a beautiful flower/word. I like how you have rhymed the poem and you hint at German/Teutonic themes with the inclusion of the "ondines" and "blonden". The last line is wonderful :-)
ReplyDeletePS: And a lovely photo!
ReplyDeleteSo nice to read a gentle piece of writing; and with a lyrical feel too: thank you
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words and poetry, very much enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteWhen I read this poem some sort of glee covered my mind.
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