tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post166558059406941228..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETS UNITED - DESIGNIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-58126807493684289272015-12-18T14:16:21.906-11:002015-12-18T14:16:21.906-11:00This is beautiful for its timelessness, its consta...This is beautiful for its timelessness, its constancy, its validity and sound words<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-30321596029251807262015-12-17T09:31:31.698-11:002015-12-17T09:31:31.698-11:00Feels like separation and loneliness prevail...may...Feels like separation and loneliness prevail...maybe more time required for her to understand that you are here...when she's ready... persistent rhythm of poem imitating the working machine and weaving process with pampering heart and thoughts. Wonderful poem. humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-73728027061380861002015-12-17T06:01:23.943-11:002015-12-17T06:01:23.943-11:00Weaving her years away.........a wonderful respons...Weaving her years away.........a wonderful response to the prompt! Intriguing closing lines, as well.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-24266936743251896952015-12-17T02:38:08.279-11:002015-12-17T02:38:08.279-11:00A persistent weaver. The loom seems to have becom...A persistent weaver. The loom seems to have become her life, and she will not be deterred. Only she determines the design. The photo works so well with the poem! Merry Christmas, Nick! See you in 2016.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-25219408943027958802015-12-16T20:18:06.257-11:002015-12-16T20:18:06.257-11:00I like the ending. We cannot be designed into some...I like the ending. We cannot be designed into someone's heart. Enjoyed the image of the weaver working relentlessly while ignoring the narrator's pleas. An excellent write that leaves much up to interpretation. Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01934232316539233405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-34433603613468942382015-12-16T20:17:59.374-11:002015-12-16T20:17:59.374-11:00I like the ending. We cannot be designed into some...I like the ending. We cannot be designed into someone's heart. Enjoyed the image of the weaver working relentlessly while ignoring the narrator's pleas. An excellent write that leaves much up to interpretation. Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01934232316539233405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-30488607892282573892015-12-16T13:27:23.398-11:002015-12-16T13:27:23.398-11:00I like the mystery in this one.You give clues and ...I like the mystery in this one.You give clues and leave it to the reader's interpretation. The weaver is in control and is deaf to your pleas. It is doubtful that she will be open to suggestions of change. I suppose you could crash tackle her and pin her to the spinning wheel..LOL...sorry,have been overtaken by Christmas cheer ... tis the silly season after all....Merry Christmas Nick !rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-50104754247703366292015-12-16T12:22:12.411-11:002015-12-16T12:22:12.411-11:00I love the mythic undertones to all of this... lik...I love the mythic undertones to all of this... like weaving is mixed up with the Fates. Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-48837234326820434162015-12-16T12:08:28.843-11:002015-12-16T12:08:28.843-11:00Weaving is so much a part of her that she does it ...Weaving is so much a part of her that she does it automatically. What a beautiful play on words was your last verse.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-69296135718326613392015-12-16T09:08:00.613-11:002015-12-16T09:08:00.613-11:00This is so beautifully written :)This is so beautifully written :)Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-56943281220621556182015-12-16T05:24:36.849-11:002015-12-16T05:24:36.849-11:00Sometimes we try so hard for someone to include us...Sometimes we try so hard for someone to include us in his or her life but sadly they just don't want to. I try to be selfless as much as possible. thanks for the enlightenment.Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-70065701539357593332015-12-16T04:08:40.462-11:002015-12-16T04:08:40.462-11:00Each of us are part of a design are we not? - the ...Each of us are part of a design are we not? - the weaver listens not to the thread.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-56017062970510255632015-12-16T03:10:08.685-11:002015-12-16T03:10:08.685-11:00A fatalistic view of unrequited love, Nicholas... ...A fatalistic view of unrequited love, Nicholas... But beautiful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12578731779043707293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-32958777516265465272015-12-16T03:06:40.309-11:002015-12-16T03:06:40.309-11:00an interesting capture of a designer....an interesting capture of a designer....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-41716426592675161252015-12-16T02:46:49.778-11:002015-12-16T02:46:49.778-11:00Think we picked the same theme, more or less!!! :)...Think we picked the same theme, more or less!!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-18583203533872586352015-12-16T02:31:43.720-11:002015-12-16T02:31:43.720-11:00Brilliant! And what if we get what we ask for? I...Brilliant! And what if we get what we ask for? I love the image of the old woman weaving without ceasing, a new myth to replace the old fates, and one equally resilient to our own designs. And then, what a way to say nay to one who will not be our future! To say nay to violence and hate. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-23499111909188000812015-12-16T02:29:40.399-11:002015-12-16T02:29:40.399-11:00Wonderfully profound!Wonderfully profound!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-74448093653572455142015-12-16T02:02:54.235-11:002015-12-16T02:02:54.235-11:00I wonder if that worker weaves her designs or foll...I wonder if that worker weaves her designs or follows a pattern in order to receive her (minimal) pay...which perhaps is a metaphor for life in general...we weave patterns..aim for some pretty picture..but those knots and twists and sticky machines often hinder that which we seek - but maybe that's all part of the design...a reason to keep weaving..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com