tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post5296491930787329872..comments2024-03-27T07:48:23.030-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETS UNITED - NIGHTIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-12822293852082904092015-07-11T00:39:51.662-11:002015-07-11T00:39:51.662-11:00Bleak and wonderful !Bleak and wonderful !rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-30586581255426954912015-07-10T23:20:16.526-11:002015-07-10T23:20:16.526-11:00Very well done - and indeed a chilling piece.
Anna...Very well done - and indeed a chilling piece.<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-81324613737571786632015-07-10T01:57:12.960-11:002015-07-10T01:57:12.960-11:00Very well written, the mood and feel of the peice...Very well written, the mood and feel of the peice do give chills.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-29389292319982811062015-07-09T06:20:16.137-11:002015-07-09T06:20:16.137-11:00I like this. It reads like an Edgar Poe piece. B...I like this. It reads like an Edgar Poe piece. But yours is not just mysterious, it is full of meaning for that final night when the clock stops. So well done!!!Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-13216061098136072012015-07-09T05:25:00.930-11:002015-07-09T05:25:00.930-11:00Nicholas,
A brilliant connection between the seas...Nicholas,<br /><br />A brilliant connection between the seasons and the darkest moments of night itself..Candle light uplifts the mood when immersed in the midst of winter and a personal time of darknesss..There is a modicum of hope, at first..Though, in the midst of a cold, cold winter, there is nothing like the warmth of a fireside belonging..Keep warm!!<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-33028460666538981922015-07-09T04:32:12.982-11:002015-07-09T04:32:12.982-11:00To get through the night can be like a walk toward...To get through the night can be like a walk towards a hope for light.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-67366231213796706092015-07-09T04:29:52.787-11:002015-07-09T04:29:52.787-11:00the power of time and the moments of night and dar...the power of time and the moments of night and darkness really captured in your words.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-597551971754489292015-07-09T01:56:57.243-11:002015-07-09T01:56:57.243-11:00Sometimes the mind rules..sometimes the body..i su...Sometimes the mind rules..sometimes the body..i suppose we have to listen and trust that part which wills us onJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-81002021815153266082015-07-08T19:01:52.871-11:002015-07-08T19:01:52.871-11:00My favourite lines are:
'While bare branches s...My favourite lines are:<br />'While bare branches shake off<br />Little pieces of loneliness' -<br />really evokes something of a barren, frozen life being eeked out in little chunks. claireylovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691439928758477628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-11568696347475985492015-07-08T16:17:01.131-11:002015-07-08T16:17:01.131-11:00the flickering flame appears as a faint voice agai...the flickering flame appears as a faint voice against the endless chilling darkness...the eerie silence of a long winter night beautifully expressed...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-91248737922460821472015-07-08T09:26:43.115-11:002015-07-08T09:26:43.115-11:00The poem is powerfully drenched with words of agon...The poem is powerfully drenched with words of agony and despair. Especially loved the lines, "bare branches shake off<br />Little pieces of loneliness"Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-19865318225013812682015-07-08T09:01:56.718-11:002015-07-08T09:01:56.718-11:00Oh I can feel the terminal nature of this poem a l...Oh I can feel the terminal nature of this poem a little too acutely, LOL......so well done, you gave me a bit of a shiver. Nice to read a winter poem when we are having terrible heat right now. Reminds me that the seasons turn, thankfully.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-26662021257367970902015-07-08T08:28:26.609-11:002015-07-08T08:28:26.609-11:00Ouch! May the clock stop only for a second while ...Ouch! May the clock stop only for a second while the speaker captures their breath . . .I say trees live through the dark and ice because nothing can stop their great big hearts. So may it be until it is time to go.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-12258725124619983202015-07-08T06:03:15.920-11:002015-07-08T06:03:15.920-11:00The third stanza is so heartfelt.. so intense.
Be...The third stanza is so heartfelt.. so intense. <br />Beautifully penned!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-76593026129508204682015-07-08T05:49:00.196-11:002015-07-08T05:49:00.196-11:00the second stanza is my favourite
Have a nice Wed...the second stanza is my favourite<br /><br />Have a nice Wednesday; My Night poem is at<br />[http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2015/07/94.html]<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-92051099513506351112015-07-08T05:14:52.398-11:002015-07-08T05:14:52.398-11:00The chill of winter and darkness of night............The chill of winter and darkness of night..............................can be spookyVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com