tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post6076162568269343690..comments2024-03-27T07:48:23.030-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY JAM - THE OWLIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-64929936244149343962014-03-26T16:00:34.895-11:002014-03-26T16:00:34.895-11:00nice turn to personal there in the last stanza...t...nice turn to personal there in the last stanza...the empty bed<br />love the sounds of the night...of the owl...<br />and your use of it sets up that close nicelyBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-90118748806359442162014-03-24T20:54:23.233-11:002014-03-24T20:54:23.233-11:00Wonderful poem which creates an uncanny atmosphere...Wonderful poem which creates an uncanny atmosphere. Very gothic!BarbVielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14423389347046739734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-4773433533619095942014-03-24T19:35:44.098-11:002014-03-24T19:35:44.098-11:00This creates an amazing atmosphere and puts you th...This creates an amazing atmosphere and puts you there with the owl. Well done. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-89293734155320922032014-03-24T15:37:35.204-11:002014-03-24T15:37:35.204-11:00You have really created an excellent portrait of a...You have really created an excellent portrait of an owl, Nick. I love the sounds especially. I can hear its ghostly sounds in your well-chosen words.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-28923966331631158752014-03-21T23:00:10.370-11:002014-03-21T23:00:10.370-11:00A very atmospheric poem! A very atmospheric poem! Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-5036519713979055102014-03-21T17:01:23.135-11:002014-03-21T17:01:23.135-11:00PS: Great illustration tooPS: Great illustration tooAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12578731779043707293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-78742627699707986792014-03-21T17:00:25.693-11:002014-03-21T17:00:25.693-11:00Like it very muchLike it very muchAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12578731779043707293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-2254893215375123682014-03-21T13:57:47.465-11:002014-03-21T13:57:47.465-11:00Elicits visceral, haunting strong emotions - a pal...Elicits visceral, haunting strong emotions - a palpable aloneness in the images and sounds played out against the owl-moon in the night sky. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-63948727505781267442014-03-21T00:05:42.166-11:002014-03-21T00:05:42.166-11:00I agree, there is a definite feeling of ghostly lo...I agree, there is a definite feeling of ghostly love hereA'sean'sationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12137051542598281391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-61876805952929626462014-03-20T16:35:01.045-11:002014-03-20T16:35:01.045-11:00So much atmosphere - you have captured the eery si...So much atmosphere - you have captured the eery sights and sounds.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-58969241047645810362014-03-20T10:31:57.357-11:002014-03-20T10:31:57.357-11:00I love the rhythm in your poem ... lovely work.I love the rhythm in your poem ... lovely work.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-24183153966340573722014-03-20T03:24:57.884-11:002014-03-20T03:24:57.884-11:00Very atmospheric and eerie, Nicholas. It had an al...Very atmospheric and eerie, Nicholas. It had an almost "Twilight" lovers feel to it.Penthesilea77https://www.blogger.com/profile/17794263567833606018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-16921017468727981752014-03-20T00:00:05.810-11:002014-03-20T00:00:05.810-11:00that's a merry note from this owl...seems he&#...that's a merry note from this owl...seems he's had a bellyful of dinner...nice lines...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-54508705373160596862014-03-19T22:01:02.269-11:002014-03-19T22:01:02.269-11:00You almost create a Shakespearean atmosphere here
...You almost create a Shakespearean atmosphere here<br />Tu -wit tu -whoo<br />and greasy Joan doth keel the pot.<br />I enjoyed this. It ends sadly. Autumn is here. You must find yourself a love soon for winter is upon us :)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.com