tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post6967586334533134663..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY WEDNESDAY - RENOVATIONSIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-67427575485098578362013-12-28T13:00:00.016-11:002013-12-28T13:00:00.016-11:00Loved this poem, delightful!Loved this poem, delightful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057909204438095414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-10173921414158257682011-08-21T06:45:55.231-11:002011-08-21T06:45:55.231-11:00A fresh take on rebirth, insight,
and renovation. ...A fresh take on rebirth, insight,<br />and renovation. The poem sweeps<br />you up, catapults you along, and<br />is over too soon. Love the last line:<br />/is more beautiful than a thing<br />brand new/. This can be said for<br />anything we renovate, from a<br />1957 Chev to an oaken chair<br />to a sad deck. Good job, sir.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-59712697972895264372011-08-19T09:31:29.183-11:002011-08-19T09:31:29.183-11:00Loved this idea and how well you expressed it. The...Loved this idea and how well you expressed it. The old scarred heart must be nurtured and definitely never available for short term rent! it took me most of a lifetime to discover that, but as they say, better late than never... and we appreciate it more for previous heartbreaks! Lovely.Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-35879538577537511262011-08-18T21:41:33.498-11:002011-08-18T21:41:33.498-11:00Beautiful poem and a wonderful metaphor.Beautiful poem and a wonderful metaphor.Okihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11875432164989515429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-77706769000379318712011-08-18T10:17:17.449-11:002011-08-18T10:17:17.449-11:00Very creative take on the prompt; a renovared hear...Very creative take on the prompt; a renovared heart, don't we wish. I enjoyed it very much.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-73250049784253319552011-08-18T09:31:04.447-11:002011-08-18T09:31:04.447-11:00Love it. Love the imagery created by thoughtful w...Love it. Love the imagery created by thoughtful words.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-60025948770180298582011-08-18T08:17:28.012-11:002011-08-18T08:17:28.012-11:00I love it! There's life in the old paintbrushe...I love it! There's life in the old paintbrushes yet.....*sigh*Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-91089997482289449282011-08-18T00:28:40.714-11:002011-08-18T00:28:40.714-11:00Beautiful poem. Renovation is so much better than ...Beautiful poem. Renovation is so much better than taking it off the market which has been my choice of late.<br /><br />Love the way you turned an everyday image into such a singular expression of heartbreak.JBinford-Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14293248281473648182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-28097119199437821962011-08-17T16:12:17.330-11:002011-08-17T16:12:17.330-11:00*sigh* such a heartfelt poem...
A broken heart can...*sigh* such a heartfelt poem...<br />A broken heart can work, but it's renovation is alomst impossible if not mended properly!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-71856597782309009852011-08-17T12:20:37.582-11:002011-08-17T12:20:37.582-11:00"And now, on this episode of 'This Old He..."And now, on this episode of 'This Old Heart'..."<br /><br />The last two lines really seal it. Good stuff.Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-1685286614245935852011-08-17T12:10:07.201-11:002011-08-17T12:10:07.201-11:00Good poem with vivid images.Good poem with vivid images.Giannihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08639472262554360709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-39940164547446627852011-08-17T09:20:17.705-11:002011-08-17T09:20:17.705-11:00Touching and poignant. Thank you.Touching and poignant. Thank you.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-8298341032834954132011-08-17T04:14:33.974-11:002011-08-17T04:14:33.974-11:00Yes, we certainly did interpret this prompt simila...Yes, we certainly did interpret this prompt similarly! I'm wondering what this says about us?!! I love your poem, especially the last two lines. It sums it all up quite well and is so beautiful a sentiment.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-50050797423234092092011-08-17T02:59:38.550-11:002011-08-17T02:59:38.550-11:00Color it you certainly DID ... quite well! Your p...Color it you certainly DID ... quite well! Your poem is one of my favorites this week!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-57590543471484250732011-08-17T02:04:45.473-11:002011-08-17T02:04:45.473-11:00I love the images in this poem, Nicholas. It is in...I love the images in this poem, Nicholas. It is interesting how you have interpreted the visual prompt into a love poem. All I could think of when I viewed the image was painting walls and nasty smells in the house!Penthehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02226869141298079186noreply@blogger.com