Thursday, 5 June 2025

BRIEF CANDLE

“Forty is the old age of youth; fifty the youth of old age.” - Victor Hugo

The New What’s Going On Blog  has as its theme in this week of writing the topic of “Contradictions”.  I thought about it and once again a line from Shakespeare was my inspiration. Death and life, youth and old age, togetherness and loneliness, Winter and Spring… Here is my offering:

Brief Candle

“Out, out, brief candle!
Life’s but a walking shadow, a poor player.”

My life is like a candle stump
Flame sputtering, in a formless lump.
Life’s now in the Winter of its course,
No energy, no strength, no force.

The years have flitted by so quick
Memories rapidly go past, flick.
I see their images as time goes by
Too fast to recognise, be seen by eye.

The coldness grows, the chill advances
No more reprieves, no second chances.
Winter with rain and snow that fall
Death nearing, having me in his thrall.

And yet, I’ve loved back in a distant Spring,
My heart was taught to fly and sing;
My soul with the beloved’s soul had merged
And up to heaven high we’d surged.
Love’s potions are as strong as death
Love’s spells are potent shibboleth.

My life’s a moth circling a flame
Diving into fire that its being will claim.
Life’s lived, and used, and spent
It came, lingered a little, and it went.

The hours, the minutes precious now,
It’s time great truths to utter, avow:
Life’s a brief candle, burning fast
Enjoy its light while it may last.

And yet, I’ve loved back in a distant Spring,
My heart was taught to fly and sing;
My soul with the beloved’s soul had merged
And up to heaven high we’d surged.
Love’s potion will preserve my essence,
Love’s spell is an eternal inflorescence.

And once again, here’s the poem set to music and you can find it in my “Otidorchestre” channel and listen to it on YouTube, SpotifyAmazon, Deezer, Flo, Pandora, and other music sharing sites.

10 comments:

  1. We hope to exist eternally beyond our human form but you've explained the reality of our current situation truthfully and beautifully: "Life’s a brief candle, burning fast/Enjoy its light while it may last."

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  2. This is wonderfully written. I especially love the stanzas that begin "And yet, I've loved back in a distant Spring"....just beautiful. Our memories are our treasures as the years go by.

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  3. "Life’s lived, and used, and spent
    It came, lingered a little, and it went." And yet! There was the spring and love and ecstasy, and those things live in memory even in age. Your poem makes that clear. And when you sing it, the truth soars!

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  4. Yes, the years pass so very quickly. I like the comparison to a candle. And the older one is, the shorter the candle is. But, alas, there are those wonderful memories of love and everything that goes with it. Beautifully penned and sung.

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  5. Oh yes that's how I feel and so good to look back at life's spring Wonderful poem

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  6. I love the rhythm of the poem that flows so spontaneously. Joy of spring and sadness of winter is well contrasted here. I especially love this line : My life’s a moth circling a flame...so beautiful.

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  7. A beautiful poem fired up with memories of love from a distant Spring.

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  8. May love's essence last forever!
    Interesting quote by Hugo :)

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  9. So refreshing to read, rhyme and meter. Helps us to remember, love is beautiful as is your poem.

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  10. "My life’s a moth circling a flame
    Diving into fire that its being will claim.
    Life’s lived, and used, and spent
    It came, lingered a little, and it went."

    This really touched me.

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