tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post3307280396210556603..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY JAM - JOURNEYSIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-26066768162425759672015-02-08T16:56:24.810-11:002015-02-08T16:56:24.810-11:00…If you are burning your remembrances, then please...…If you are burning your remembrances, then please also get rid of the knife. <br /><br />Powerful.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31575013168046619042015-02-08T10:38:46.288-11:002015-02-08T10:38:46.288-11:00Powerful poem!Powerful poem!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-48740779288996680742015-02-07T12:06:01.336-11:002015-02-07T12:06:01.336-11:00Your cloth of old sorrows --- a powerful image. I...Your cloth of old sorrows --- a powerful image. I wonder: is it sleek and smooth and tight, or is it loosely woven so that it breaks apart at every touch? Well-crafted work!!!Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-56825824030524976172015-02-06T15:49:24.210-11:002015-02-06T15:49:24.210-11:00Oh, to avoid the shipwrecks and harbor safe! That...Oh, to avoid the shipwrecks and harbor safe! That would be my goal. But each of us have to survive a few shipwrecks in life, I guess. Makes the safe harbor all that much more delightful! Powerful poem.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-3515857332196140312015-02-06T12:33:13.253-11:002015-02-06T12:33:13.253-11:00You are a survivor. Keep on a sailing the ship of...You are a survivor. Keep on a sailing the ship of life Nicholas!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31308341736816881262015-02-05T13:44:15.385-11:002015-02-05T13:44:15.385-11:00Nicholas,
Loved this voyage, as per the trials an...Nicholas,<br /><br />Loved this voyage, as per the trials and tribulations one can come across in life itself...The expectations and the disappointments. Each a facet of the experience involved...<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-33650934702634021752015-02-04T21:14:58.122-11:002015-02-04T21:14:58.122-11:00great job, enjoyed it
Journey To Someone's He...great job, enjoyed it<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2015/02/journey-to-someones-heart.html" rel="nofollow">Journey To Someone's Heart</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-55002440017449731292015-02-04T14:46:27.888-11:002015-02-04T14:46:27.888-11:00Hi Nicholas long time since I've been here. I...Hi Nicholas long time since I've been here. I very much enjoyed your poem Happy New Year :)Bevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16103626093025254193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-23490690594403655492015-02-04T11:59:09.037-11:002015-02-04T11:59:09.037-11:00I think that when we set sail we must be prepared ...I think that when we set sail we must be prepared for a shipwreck. We don't wish for one, but we have to accept the possibility. It is good to take old sorrows along. The ideal would be to dump them all overboard before one approaches that distant shore.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-21781030098414884402015-02-04T07:36:08.723-11:002015-02-04T07:36:08.723-11:00I do like the way you played with the extended met...I do like the way you played with the extended metaphor - including the possibility of sinking or of a shipwreck.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-76073884497089274702015-02-04T00:43:47.340-11:002015-02-04T00:43:47.340-11:00i would love to have lived in an age when there we...i would love to have lived in an age when there were ocean going vessels...now that would have bee quite the journey...but challenging as well....life is a journey, that is the metaphor...and if nothing else, the journey will always be interesting....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-72283753299475907452015-02-03T20:13:05.700-11:002015-02-03T20:13:05.700-11:00A life lived with no regrets is a life well lived,...A life lived with no regrets is a life well lived, so I think we all must take such voyage.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-76702835378817589492015-02-03T18:59:23.313-11:002015-02-03T18:59:23.313-11:00Wow! this is so essentially awesome, i luv the mes...Wow! this is so essentially awesome, i luv the message of staying strong and the mood of understanding challenges<br /><br />Have a nice Wednesday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-60131559866160912022015-02-03T18:53:03.828-11:002015-02-03T18:53:03.828-11:00all life is a journey and so much is like being in...all life is a journey and so much is like being in a sail boat great poemartbyraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04153847801206823450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-74356939544828424722015-02-03T17:51:51.186-11:002015-02-03T17:51:51.186-11:00We risk sinking each time we sail but we keep sail...We risk sinking each time we sail but we keep sailing.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-26576789719259023592015-02-03T17:24:03.538-11:002015-02-03T17:24:03.538-11:00I like your use of metaphor here. And the picture ...I like your use of metaphor here. And the picture is excellent to go with it. I do hope you have a good journey this time despite the possibility of shipwreck.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.com