tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post3714652729076510277..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETS UNITED - WORDSIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-29098510916133143082018-02-16T21:39:26.340-11:002018-02-16T21:39:26.340-11:00Oh yes I can identify with this one.I was older so...Oh yes I can identify with this one.I was older so I have no excuse. You were young and did not realise back then that so many have virtually nothing to give ( poor unfortunate creatures)... you are the lucky one who gives so much, enjoys so much, and shares so much. Now, how do you say....good for you in Greek:) <br />rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-18629843016062316112018-02-15T21:44:08.815-11:002018-02-15T21:44:08.815-11:00I can't read them without feeling bitter – hav...I can't read them without feeling bitter – having experienced what you so well describe.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-36238732721995113162018-02-15T05:59:33.970-11:002018-02-15T05:59:33.970-11:00Emotions skillfully captured in your words. Well ...Emotions skillfully captured in your words. Well done!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-41080371431095301012018-02-15T03:59:55.354-11:002018-02-15T03:59:55.354-11:00A touching question...can feel the pain ...!!A touching question...can feel the pain ...!!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-22820992576876644232018-02-14T16:11:13.166-11:002018-02-14T16:11:13.166-11:00Raw emotion in this. Why must so much die? An an...Raw emotion in this. Why must so much die? An anquished heart asks this. Not only in nature but in life, waiting for words to come.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-35862837832313778142018-02-14T14:06:30.608-11:002018-02-14T14:06:30.608-11:00An emotional piece of writing. You can see promis...An emotional piece of writing. You can see promises dying like deflated balloons. Beautiful.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-57774095624135819852018-02-14T11:48:10.576-11:002018-02-14T11:48:10.576-11:00As I read this I could imagine this being ued at t...As I read this I could imagine this being ued at the start of a novel sucking the reader in with such impassioned words. Beautifully written.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-25659920825394184012018-02-14T11:25:10.968-11:002018-02-14T11:25:10.968-11:00This story is so full of emotion, sadness and trut...This story is so full of emotion, sadness and truth. I love the first lines, and what follows is heartbreak that stems from the power of words, or the power of their abscence. Very good, strong writing.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-45598998575394376982018-02-14T08:30:16.948-11:002018-02-14T08:30:16.948-11:00Such sad poems, especially the lines:
'A promi...Such sad poems, especially the lines:<br />'A promise of rain in the drought;<br />But why must so much die,<br />While waiting for the rain?'<br />and <br />'A promise of hope to the betrayed<br />Who already knows that promises are hollow<br />And hope is an illusion'.<br /><br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-46589725622840260442018-02-14T07:58:40.946-11:002018-02-14T07:58:40.946-11:00The power of words, the hollow ones, empty promise...The power of words, the hollow ones, empty promises...all what a word or words can do; bring joy or sadness. Brilliant write, Nicholas.Khaya Ronkainenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286352495379234651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-14334756543164567382018-02-14T07:18:41.907-11:002018-02-14T07:18:41.907-11:00Well captured! And very sad. I can feel the let ...Well captured! And very sad. I can feel the let down-though anticipated--and I can feel the haste.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-84794980251953442722018-02-14T05:12:07.219-11:002018-02-14T05:12:07.219-11:00Why must so much die, while waiting for rain? I fe...Why must so much die, while waiting for rain? I feel the waiting, for that letter, then the disappointment at whst finally came. Such good writing, Nicholas.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-75019390119170088022018-02-14T02:31:53.391-11:002018-02-14T02:31:53.391-11:00A beautiful poem of hope against hope and the trea...A beautiful poem of hope against hope and the treacherous, 'frosty words'.Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-22457812973683366562018-02-14T01:57:15.537-11:002018-02-14T01:57:15.537-11:00This is beautiful work. I can feel your painThis is beautiful work. I can feel your painSamyuktha Semi Jayaprakashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03879275723002707278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-34684892284773457492018-02-14T01:37:11.624-11:002018-02-14T01:37:11.624-11:00 why must so much die,
While waiting for the rain?... why must so much die,<br />While waiting for the rain?<br />... what a fabulous line full of hope and hopelessness...Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.com