tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post4503017438253161841..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY JAM - CLOUDSIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-32317555541583707892014-01-28T06:08:50.286-11:002014-01-28T06:08:50.286-11:00This is an unexpected view of winter and spring--b...This is an unexpected view of winter and spring--beautiful descriptions! The photo is stunning too.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-15873105690585349102014-01-28T03:13:13.325-11:002014-01-28T03:13:13.325-11:00I feel terrible saying this but I spent all day at...I feel terrible saying this but I spent all day at the beach today in glorious weather. I am sure it is very beautiful but I could never survive your deathly corpse cold of winter. You <br />poem captures the spirit of it very well.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-56642089014333424452014-01-27T14:17:21.303-11:002014-01-27T14:17:21.303-11:00cool use of language in this. like the days dilati...cool use of language in this. like the days dilating. you def captured the feel of winter...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-34066634646419720892014-01-25T04:15:57.640-11:002014-01-25T04:15:57.640-11:00beautiful photo - I really like the darkness with ...beautiful photo - I really like the darkness with the hint of new growth in the branches on the side. Those first few flowers of spring can't come fast enough!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-10219952326770301732014-01-25T03:22:02.790-11:002014-01-25T03:22:02.790-11:00This is so beautifully written, Nicholas. I like t...This is so beautifully written, Nicholas. I like the idea of days dilating.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-90299805474660901172014-01-23T17:56:06.116-11:002014-01-23T17:56:06.116-11:00Your photo is spectacular......and the poem is won...Your photo is spectacular......and the poem is wonderful. I especially love your opening line......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-33074455356631462292014-01-23T04:32:20.410-11:002014-01-23T04:32:20.410-11:00God, what wonderful imagery here ... this is a bea...God, what wonderful imagery here ... this is a beautiful piece. Susan Lindquisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-73090359941489802852014-01-23T02:23:16.912-11:002014-01-23T02:23:16.912-11:00I enjoyed thinking about the 'corpse of winter...I enjoyed thinking about the 'corpse of winter' you mentioned in your poem, Nick. I am hoping that we will be able to mourn winter here very soon. The dark looming clouds here still hang around with a great perseverance. I am waiting for that lengthening twilight you wrote about and for the sap to run again. Spring cannot come soon enough for me. Smiles!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-25021507313189632792014-01-23T00:43:19.431-11:002014-01-23T00:43:19.431-11:00Beautiful words and imagery in your poem, Nick! I ...Beautiful words and imagery in your poem, Nick! I like the idea of tension as spring approaches. Winter lingers on while the new season slowly arrives. At this point in time, I feel we are yearning for the days to dilate.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-36740396598604924832014-01-22T21:25:54.580-11:002014-01-22T21:25:54.580-11:00This paints a wonderful vivid picture, i love the ...This paints a wonderful vivid picture, i love the white corpse of winter, magnificent words. A glimpse into the heart.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.com