tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post5651969787043540482..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETS UNITED - PREDATOR & PREYIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-43364805764459110472016-08-12T00:00:12.857-11:002016-08-12T00:00:12.857-11:00enchantingenchantingSamyuktha Semi Jayaprakashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03879275723002707278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-65559636419229473462016-08-11T19:36:21.532-11:002016-08-11T19:36:21.532-11:00so love this poem.............
The vice of your em...so love this poem.............<br />The vice of your embrace crushes me,<br />I die and suffocate whispering your name.<br />My hands caress your supple skin<br />As your silver nails gash my flesh,<br />Exposing raw sinew, tense tendon.<br />Jasminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09437907985252465564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-4707854761402717642016-08-10T18:48:39.038-11:002016-08-10T18:48:39.038-11:00Those vivid imagery in this haunting piece... Those vivid imagery in this haunting piece... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-22084457102215266392016-08-10T18:27:36.765-11:002016-08-10T18:27:36.765-11:00What a glorious poem, the ancient poets would be p...What a glorious poem, the ancient poets would be proud of you.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-6653575228217639972016-08-10T16:02:23.536-11:002016-08-10T16:02:23.536-11:00i love the quote about predator and prey evolving ...i love the quote about predator and prey evolving together. My poem is on a somewhat similar vein..............this is a very interesting post and the imagery in your poem is wonderfully vivid. One can see the sinew!!!!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-36846518477196690052016-08-10T10:26:51.791-11:002016-08-10T10:26:51.791-11:00Enjoyed the mythological, Nicholas. Quite fantasti...Enjoyed the mythological, Nicholas. Quite fantastic imagery & originality.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-12828581862923146712016-08-10T09:59:29.654-11:002016-08-10T09:59:29.654-11:00Dark, mythical and quite alluring
Much love...Dark, mythical and quite alluring<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-4278873132065341682016-08-10T08:44:55.793-11:002016-08-10T08:44:55.793-11:00I really like this subject matter. ))I really like this subject matter. ))Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-56303669242784485112016-08-10T05:40:23.540-11:002016-08-10T05:40:23.540-11:00Those strawberry lies would be very enticing to ov...Those strawberry lies would be very enticing to overlook - you raise a good point that predator cannot live without prey and vice versa..such is life..and a really good poem!Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-6290553018672349282016-08-10T03:59:19.188-11:002016-08-10T03:59:19.188-11:00So full of surprising images! This one stopped me...So full of surprising images! This one stopped me cold:<br />"Your pearly teeth biting each syllable<br />Making it shout in barbarous pleasure."<br />To see Selene and Artemis in one is marvelous. Thank you.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-43190088498200260942016-08-10T03:42:23.728-11:002016-08-10T03:42:23.728-11:00My goodness!! This is beautifully haunting!!My goodness!! This is beautifully haunting!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-12546194790582387482016-08-10T02:20:31.304-11:002016-08-10T02:20:31.304-11:00bloody and stone cold your words for this prompt -...bloody and stone cold your words for this prompt - couldn't be betterAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-60785791755834623292016-08-10T02:06:40.583-11:002016-08-10T02:06:40.583-11:00love this touch of myth and so vividly portrayed.....love this touch of myth and so vividly portrayed....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.com