tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post6774972038403669333..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETS UNITED - JUSTICEIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-60900736686106882032015-05-01T16:02:42.835-11:002015-05-01T16:02:42.835-11:00wow, justice a ghoist, a vampire and a butterfly a...wow, justice a ghoist, a vampire and a butterfly all in one!!<br /><br /><a href="https://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/08/06/joy-from-acts-of-pleasure/" rel="nofollow">Joy From Acts of Pleasure</a>Tammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13609172461325705463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-27911535238906100362015-05-01T07:35:04.734-11:002015-05-01T07:35:04.734-11:00applause! i totally digged how you made your line...applause! i totally digged how you made your lines all sound like some forensic tv show or something. brilliant and very creative!!! bone-tingling too. thanks.Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-76115859007991579842015-04-30T03:57:06.716-11:002015-04-30T03:57:06.716-11:00There are just too many of them moving around. Tho...There are just too many of them moving around. Thoughtless yes. But their actions are those of villains because they cause suffering and failure. A powerful writing! Brilliant!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-50027757824114926662015-04-30T01:55:33.912-11:002015-04-30T01:55:33.912-11:00Yes the system must change into something most bea...Yes the system must change into something most beautiful than before. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-12855963135213088262015-04-29T18:39:14.669-11:002015-04-29T18:39:14.669-11:00Wonderful poem, Nicholas, about those who err, do ...Wonderful poem, Nicholas, about those who err, do evil deeds and flout the laws that society has put them in charge of upholding. But I like your last stanza, which is full of optimism about the power of redemption. Everyone, no matter how bad can admit good into their heart and be redeemed...BarbVielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14423389347046739734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-58822855303177770382015-04-29T18:05:56.884-11:002015-04-29T18:05:56.884-11:00this is a call to those who willfully violate the ...this is a call to those who willfully violate the truthful texture of the society to break their odious shells, to come out and learn to live and let live in an amicable atmosphere of purity and truthfulness...love the end...great lines Nick :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-17679888319837105582015-04-29T17:45:23.323-11:002015-04-29T17:45:23.323-11:00Sorry Nic....there are few butterfles around and l...Sorry Nic....there are few butterfles around and loads of ikky grubs but I love your optimism and hope which is a good positive thing....zipedee doo daa !:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-71560976956198193432015-04-29T16:49:41.749-11:002015-04-29T16:49:41.749-11:00The famous quote "The law is an ass" by ...The famous quote "The law is an ass" by Dickens is applicable to most jurisdictions. But it is the best that has been invented by man...so clearly then it is flawed!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-550352839198806222015-04-29T11:55:59.688-11:002015-04-29T11:55:59.688-11:00Nicholas,
The systems of justice around the world...Nicholas,<br /><br />The systems of justice around the world, all seem to share this lassitude and reluctance, to seemingly work with the truth and see justice done. Instead, the truth emerges as more corruption and decisions, which are questioned by the rest of society. Sad that learned men, turn to the 'other side,' themselves. I wrote a poem some years ago called: The Scrupulously Unscupulous. It was prompted by politicans and religious leaders in Northern Ireland.With that in mind, I'm not sure that there is the will to see many beautiful butterflies!!<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-13600434303536607972015-04-29T09:19:17.330-11:002015-04-29T09:19:17.330-11:00I agree with Myrna - bold and tough with a soupçon...I agree with Myrna - bold and tough with a soupçon of hope.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-3901151861031009452015-04-29T04:43:27.967-11:002015-04-29T04:43:27.967-11:00Your poem is bold and honest. I like the hope you...Your poem is bold and honest. I like the hope you give in the last stanza. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-6390992632227292352015-04-29T04:37:29.067-11:002015-04-29T04:37:29.067-11:00Intense & frightening..! Loved the portrayal o...Intense & frightening..! Loved the portrayal of justice in these lines :D<br />xoxo Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-12617884025006723922015-04-29T04:29:07.327-11:002015-04-29T04:29:07.327-11:00You paint the portrait starkly and with keen obser...You paint the portrait starkly and with keen observation of the cost of such a stance. I love the brilliance of the butterfly at the end - there is always hope of transformation, though unlikely when a being is that far gone. A thought-provoking and hard hitting piece!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-10403956416211354802015-04-29T03:16:44.704-11:002015-04-29T03:16:44.704-11:00Hi Nick - this really is a frightening picture of ...Hi Nick - this really is a frightening picture of 'justice.' So often it seems that 'silence makes the evil stronger.' Eventually the 'faceless ghost' may lose its soul completely & become just an 'empty shell.' But we can always hope that the brilliant butterfly could and would eventually re-emerge to allow REAL justice to reign once more! A powerful write!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-51566537472066641402015-04-29T03:07:36.434-11:002015-04-29T03:07:36.434-11:00Pow! I love your hard-hitting questions and ultima...Pow! I love your hard-hitting questions and ultimately the hope that what seems hard crusted can be transformed. I hope all of these newborn butterflies don't have to go through an evil phase before they see the truth!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com