tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post7964165115322539536..comments2024-03-28T10:37:38.851-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETS UNITED - TWO SOULSIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-63238361102564045452016-09-30T12:48:06.358-11:002016-09-30T12:48:06.358-11:00Refrain, restrain yourself!
Don’t let your heart b...Refrain, restrain yourself!<br />Don’t let your heart be broken!<br /><br />Love is a gamble it can turn out good or bad! But one can influence it to make it better with lots of efforts of refraining and restraining! Very true Nick!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-87809683496887089372016-09-29T13:44:22.093-11:002016-09-29T13:44:22.093-11:00Very sad ending, to find that love has lied. But ...Very sad ending, to find that love has lied. But so often, it seems, it does.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-38221775119336032812016-09-29T05:48:59.778-11:002016-09-29T05:48:59.778-11:00Caught between wanting and not wanting....dilemmat...Caught between wanting and not wanting....dilemmaticvanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-67612896204608825812016-09-29T05:48:46.704-11:002016-09-29T05:48:46.704-11:00Caught between wanting and not wanting....dilemmat...Caught between wanting and not wanting....dilemmaticvanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-75334456085868055962016-09-28T20:03:46.459-11:002016-09-28T20:03:46.459-11:00Love and contentment are so diffrent for we can lo...Love and contentment are so diffrent for we can love passionately but not necessarily be contented with it for all time. It is a lucky couple to have both. I like you line "So smile when you can".Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-77741519562472423952016-09-28T17:30:07.006-11:002016-09-28T17:30:07.006-11:00This reminds me a lot of German leider. A lot of t...This reminds me a lot of German leider. A lot of the subjects were about unrequited love. Great art is made from the suffering of unrequited love. I love the first stanza...the serendipitous opening of the right page. Page 162.<br />Thought provoking and beautifully expressed.<br />rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-11009007575294777932016-09-28T13:59:34.349-11:002016-09-28T13:59:34.349-11:00Oh how sad! Unrequited love causes great pain. No ...Oh how sad! Unrequited love causes great pain. No matter how delicate the refusal by the non-respondent, one's soul has been captivated and is consumed by love... The illustration is wonderful! Penthesilea77https://www.blogger.com/profile/17794263567833606018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31281333039165809172016-09-28T13:34:32.164-11:002016-09-28T13:34:32.164-11:00Well, this is the politest brush-off I've read...Well, this is the politest brush-off I've read. One person is in love and his/her soul is captive but the other person experiences only affection and hence has a free soul... Poor love-struck person, who no doubt will suffer greatly and be heartbroken. The warning may be heard but I don't think it will be heeded! Excellent poem. I wonder what the significance of the German language is - was the person in love German, I wonder? Killer line in German: "Oh! Love! Love has lied"...JohnDotGarveyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07928748850738121068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-11494707373674133832016-09-28T11:33:51.423-11:002016-09-28T11:33:51.423-11:00We live in the fear of losing a love we do not hav...We live in the fear of losing a love we do not have and therefore we never will...what a caged we build around ourselves...may we chose love...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-61615414496758895962016-09-28T08:02:37.655-11:002016-09-28T08:02:37.655-11:00I didn't know that about the butterfly and agr...I didn't know that about the butterfly and agree the picture is a very powerful addition to this poem - darling can sometimes be more bloody than we imagine Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-11579559853688606202016-09-28T06:59:51.599-11:002016-09-28T06:59:51.599-11:00Therein lies the crux of the agony of the uncertai...Therein lies the crux of the agony of the uncertain heart. If one could learn to allow love to liberate, rather than constrain........but for that one needs either confidence, or an assurance that one is loved. Sigh. A meaty philosophy to grapple with in this poem!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-65585359326959948982016-09-28T06:24:48.459-11:002016-09-28T06:24:48.459-11:00POW! Cupid/psyche is one of my favorite explorati...POW! Cupid/psyche is one of my favorite explorations of mortal/supernatural. Sometimes Love seems so much the latter, so freeing, but indeed, it comes with desire and that brings obligations/complications in this mortal world: "You hope to wake in me the same sweet “Liebe” that consumes you..." Of course. If only all wanderers could be so clear. If only we mortals could listen.<br />Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-20040565620278684562016-09-28T05:56:24.179-11:002016-09-28T05:56:24.179-11:00I love the reference to Psyche and Eros here ❤️ su...I love the reference to Psyche and Eros here ❤️ such a beautifully crafted poem ❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-20565085184289860712016-09-28T02:41:46.709-11:002016-09-28T02:41:46.709-11:00really love the progression of the poem, the last ...really love the progression of the poem, the last warning & the mythical touch...enjoyed the story of Psyche & Eros too :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-34269012242239413422016-09-28T02:26:50.917-11:002016-09-28T02:26:50.917-11:00The photo is a bit startling: first the lovely ima...The photo is a bit startling: first the lovely image of the butterfly fluttering freely between the beautifully coloured birds but then the demise of the butterfly as food for the bird on the right brings one up short.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09223040482420514208noreply@blogger.com