tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post9012074808524157761..comments2024-03-27T07:48:23.030-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY JAM - EYESIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31466956989618729642015-03-18T12:33:54.961-11:002015-03-18T12:33:54.961-11:00Melancholy and beautiful, perfect for the coming o...Melancholy and beautiful, perfect for the coming of Autumn and old age...Penthesilea77https://www.blogger.com/profile/17794263567833606018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-18675763657879059172015-03-14T22:34:36.449-11:002015-03-14T22:34:36.449-11:00beautiful composition, loved the comparisons and i...beautiful composition, loved the comparisons and imagery in itCifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-20270478221418186652015-03-13T15:51:40.104-11:002015-03-13T15:51:40.104-11:00My eyes extinguished,
Are overcome by the opium
Of...My eyes extinguished,<br />Are overcome by the opium<br />Of your memory;<br /><br /><br />really nice discription here<br /><br />artbyraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04153847801206823450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31983396796969847922015-03-12T07:09:59.689-11:002015-03-12T07:09:59.689-11:00Lovely words.
Nice imagery.Lovely words.<br />Nice imagery.Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-9702412050726691692015-03-11T20:07:06.879-11:002015-03-11T20:07:06.879-11:00love the comparisons used so beautifully in the po...love the comparisons used so beautifully in the poem...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-18882282960336735502015-03-11T18:09:02.741-11:002015-03-11T18:09:02.741-11:00"The opium of your memory" is a very pow..."The opium of your memory" is a very powerful image. It makes me want to know more and yet the mystery of it all is what makes the lines so good. I also like the way you used fall in your poem.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-34043307475746707342015-03-11T16:43:56.171-11:002015-03-11T16:43:56.171-11:00This is so melancholy and dark, yet beautiful and ...This is so melancholy and dark, yet beautiful and poignant. It captures the sense of loss, so well: Loss of a lover, loss of the summer, loss of youth too, maybe?JohnDotGarveyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07928748850738121068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31393856017350439592015-03-11T09:02:19.437-11:002015-03-11T09:02:19.437-11:00I like the images in these stanzas. Especially lik...I like the images in these stanzas. Especially like the description of autumn overtaking summer. Each stanza could be a poem on its own. Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-48149251322434491162015-03-11T07:37:45.222-11:002015-03-11T07:37:45.222-11:00This is a maelstrom of emotions and colour, so wel...This is a maelstrom of emotions and colour, so well crafted and wonderful expressions. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-64701986613437520872015-03-11T03:05:51.433-11:002015-03-11T03:05:51.433-11:00that surrender is a surrender f wise eyes
have a ...that surrender is a surrender f wise eyes<br /><br />have a nice Wednesday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-14303411312161637952015-03-11T02:22:22.550-11:002015-03-11T02:22:22.550-11:00Memories ~ love the opium comparison.Memories ~ love the opium comparison.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-26809122819249895622015-03-11T00:20:07.682-11:002015-03-11T00:20:07.682-11:00First of all, ha, I am glad we are entering spring...First of all, ha, I am glad we are entering spring and not fall. Smiles. I like that blue eyes are forced shut by autumn..I think this can be read on a couple of different levels. And unfortunately we have no choice but to surrender to the fading and wilting that does take place...in nature each autumn and...in all of us!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-63598717686780250752015-03-10T23:32:03.353-11:002015-03-10T23:32:03.353-11:00at the loss of another...the eyes can lose a bit o...at the loss of another...the eyes can lose a bit of their life...and twinkle...<br />autumn is a time of passing/transition into the sleep and everything<br />is brilliant one last time before dying...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com