tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post9140790404834315266..comments2024-03-27T07:48:23.030-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY JAM - HARVEST TIMEIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-67602863508748565732014-09-22T12:51:34.837-11:002014-09-22T12:51:34.837-11:00Ughh. Gave me the creeps this one. Beautiful but c...Ughh. Gave me the creeps this one. Beautiful but chilling - just like the season you’re describing I guessA'sean'sationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12137051542598281391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-21999463530950191062014-09-22T12:49:42.094-11:002014-09-22T12:49:42.094-11:00How somber and melancholy… It must be an awful sea...How somber and melancholy… It must be an awful season for people with depression and sadness in their heart. Sad, but you have captured the feelings beautifully, Nicholas.BarbVielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14423389347046739734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-404477377322674282014-09-20T06:21:53.957-11:002014-09-20T06:21:53.957-11:00Beautiful writing Nicholas. I love how you connec...Beautiful writing Nicholas. I love how you connected the seasons with people and their seasons dark at times but part of what many face.Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-85639487625159638902014-09-17T11:50:47.684-11:002014-09-17T11:50:47.684-11:00Nicholas, this is so sad and desperate... Yet ther...Nicholas, this is so sad and desperate... Yet there is also beauty and your word pictures paint a somber but highly charged view of the autumn/winter seasons.Penthesilea77https://www.blogger.com/profile/17794263567833606018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-24370934985364163632014-09-17T10:02:55.567-11:002014-09-17T10:02:55.567-11:00Definitely a very dark piece here. Mystery as well...Definitely a very dark piece here. Mystery as well. The picture is perfect with it.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-83503947304140450452014-09-17T06:45:25.580-11:002014-09-17T06:45:25.580-11:00There is a foreboding in the coming of Autumn that...There is a foreboding in the coming of Autumn that sense of darkness, i love the way you have captured the despairalan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-60143947111157152782014-09-17T03:21:57.975-11:002014-09-17T03:21:57.975-11:00I guess I can agree,, for the most part that there...I guess I can agree,, for the most part that there is not a thing to look forward to with the coming of winter...except maybe the coming of spring after that. There has to be hope somewhere. Well written, but so sad.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-7640743783901525872014-09-17T03:13:24.422-11:002014-09-17T03:13:24.422-11:00Autumn is so beautiful despite it's chilling f...Autumn is so beautiful despite it's chilling foretelling of winter.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-62449279240019066002014-09-17T02:55:31.438-11:002014-09-17T02:55:31.438-11:00I know some people for whom the change of seasons ...I know some people for whom the change of seasons (autumn and spring) brings melancholy and depression. They seem totally oblivious to anything else. How sad when someone is so depressed they cannot enjoy the seasons of joy.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-71831559604089985492014-09-17T01:59:54.603-11:002014-09-17T01:59:54.603-11:00Oh, what a picture of a depressed person's lif...Oh, what a picture of a depressed person's life you have drawn. Seems this individual has had no joy, or has not recognized the possible joy in their life. I feel sorry for someone with this kind of perspective...a person who has had no past joy, has no present joy, and sees only 'sprouts of dejection' in the coming spring. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-31951259494097384852014-09-17T00:59:37.965-11:002014-09-17T00:59:37.965-11:00the theme of desolation is resonated well througho...the theme of desolation is resonated well throughout, the tiny spark of light at line 20 "Helping me to evade death, if only to await"<br />is welcomed with an out breath<br /><br />have a nice Wednesday<br /><br />much love...<br />Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-53480120426347712832014-09-17T00:41:55.085-11:002014-09-17T00:41:55.085-11:00oops I was going to say If I lived in Melbourne I ...oops I was going to say If I lived in Melbourne I 'd shout you a beer and a moussaka to cheer you up !:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-30623674316466564212014-09-17T00:39:24.393-11:002014-09-17T00:39:24.393-11:00Full of despair. As you said it is not literal and...Full of despair. As you said it is not literal and could refer to the state of the planet with its atrocities and wars taking place rather than anything of a personal nature. I hope not anyway. Let us enjoy our beautiful Spring weather. If I rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-58016807316749462662014-09-16T20:14:12.502-11:002014-09-16T20:14:12.502-11:00The poem is dark indeed from the beginning to the ...The poem is dark indeed from the beginning to the end...some great images like harvest of despair, fruit of poison to a phantom spring do speak of a shattered life...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.com