tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post95624622408157831..comments2024-03-27T07:48:23.030-11:00Comments on Intelliblog: POETRY JAM - QUIETIntellibloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-88947451014246070322014-12-17T19:32:35.832-11:002014-12-17T19:32:35.832-11:00Winter surely brings a certain quietness, to liste...Winter surely brings a certain quietness, to listen to various other musics of life. Nice poem :)MeenalSonalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17427385947855019585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-49278173661473865402014-12-14T15:22:53.676-11:002014-12-14T15:22:53.676-11:00This poem sounded really nice as I read it. It env...This poem sounded really nice as I read it. It enveloped some of the major points in winter that we always expect. The line "Plumes of grey smoke, evoking" reminded me of what it used to be like to smell the wood burning in the chimney. I don't have a wood stove anymore, so this was a nice memory reminder. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-63917453126730651752014-12-13T21:30:31.217-11:002014-12-13T21:30:31.217-11:00fog-enveloped loneliness.
Sometimes it is "s...fog-enveloped loneliness.<br /><br />Sometimes it is "solitude" which is a bit different. The cold sheets - yes, but only just in the beginning - the socks come off before the morning ;)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-22318035913827479622014-12-12T17:00:07.960-11:002014-12-12T17:00:07.960-11:00yes the snow just quiets the airyes the snow just quiets the airartbyraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04153847801206823450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-70007918587910568622014-12-12T13:35:06.593-11:002014-12-12T13:35:06.593-11:00Well winter has arrived too in my part of the worl...Well winter has arrived too in my part of the world ~ I specially like this part:<br /><br />Silken silences, fog-enveloped loneliness,<br />Cold, pure sheets and long, white nights.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-38257664184654583502014-12-12T12:39:01.543-11:002014-12-12T12:39:01.543-11:00Oh, that last stanza is most memorable. I enjoyed...Oh, that last stanza is most memorable. I enjoyed the images in your poem!Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-73134199978464163582014-12-11T12:13:00.483-11:002014-12-11T12:13:00.483-11:00Nicholas,
A fine cityscape, in your words. It fee...Nicholas,<br /><br />A fine cityscape, in your words. It feels cold from the view!! ''Bony fist, fog-envelopedloneliness.'...I'd like to experience the topsy-turvy idea, of an Australian Christmas!!<br />Well captured winter quietness...<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-4283473638005669292014-12-11T12:02:27.602-11:002014-12-11T12:02:27.602-11:00Beautiful and melancholic, perfect for winter... L...Beautiful and melancholic, perfect for winter... Lovely poem.Penthesilea77https://www.blogger.com/profile/17794263567833606018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-21214460629732497272014-12-11T00:47:45.708-11:002014-12-11T00:47:45.708-11:00Daphne ,open fires, and hot buttered toast....love...Daphne ,open fires, and hot buttered toast....lovely sentient winter images.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-87024962730120367612014-12-10T22:04:06.664-11:002014-12-10T22:04:06.664-11:00winter has arrived and in such a poetic way, well ...winter has arrived and in such a poetic way, well written<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2014/12/quiet-always.html" rel="nofollow">Quiet Always</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-52299787252744902982014-12-10T17:15:16.113-11:002014-12-10T17:15:16.113-11:00well you def nailed the silence that is winter...i...well you def nailed the silence that is winter...i rather like the hush of falling snow...<br />but the deep dark of the season can def bring on the feel of lonelinessBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-24140644437933632292014-12-10T17:07:47.615-11:002014-12-10T17:07:47.615-11:00Gorgeous!Gorgeous!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-91862076968519011912014-12-10T14:16:40.903-11:002014-12-10T14:16:40.903-11:00Gorgeous poem, though sad and wistful. It gave me ...Gorgeous poem, though sad and wistful. It gave me chills reading it...BarbVielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14423389347046739734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-87839631012390837572014-12-10T12:38:51.068-11:002014-12-10T12:38:51.068-11:00Loved especially "Cold, pure sheets and long,...Loved especially "Cold, pure sheets and long, white nights."Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-54964766427639856402014-12-10T10:52:39.200-11:002014-12-10T10:52:39.200-11:00Beautiful images and i embrace the wintery emotion...Beautiful images and i embrace the wintery emotion on your words. This really captures the season.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-41057420790050522562014-12-10T09:44:38.761-11:002014-12-10T09:44:38.761-11:00Wonderful capture of winter and quiet. Although I ...Wonderful capture of winter and quiet. Although I live in a mild climate area (S California) I too can imagine a white winter in your poem.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-89910833441226117202014-12-10T09:37:41.997-11:002014-12-10T09:37:41.997-11:00This is winter indeed! Funny how the snow and the ...This is winter indeed! Funny how the snow and the darkness just seem to muffle and dim everyhting.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-153173312100405392014-12-10T03:24:40.903-11:002014-12-10T03:24:40.903-11:00Such an evocative post - love the silken silences ...Such an evocative post - love the silken silences ...elaine https://www.blogger.com/profile/17075935631756457901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-17977481033840340752014-12-10T02:53:28.343-11:002014-12-10T02:53:28.343-11:00luv the appeal to the senses in your poem; its jus...luv the appeal to the senses in your poem; its just draws one in "quietly"<br /><br />have a nice Wednesday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-66294216637642260652014-12-10T01:40:07.783-11:002014-12-10T01:40:07.783-11:00Ha, for living in the Southern Hemisphere, you def...Ha, for living in the Southern Hemisphere, you definitely wrote vividly about how it is in winter in the Northern. Hemisphere. Truly, I do think that winter IS the 'quietest' season of all. I do like 'clutching in his bony fist' which describes it well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-47037830033096022972014-12-10T01:21:23.690-11:002014-12-10T01:21:23.690-11:00Love that last stanza.Love that last stanza.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417961221792880115.post-34653721794384780972014-12-09T19:17:29.913-11:002014-12-09T19:17:29.913-11:00There are a few negative things associated with wi...There are a few negative things associated with winter but still it has its own charm.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com