“Education is
what remains after one has forgotten what one has learned in school.” - AlbertEinstein
This week PoetryJam has as a theme “Back to School”:
“Think about what the first day of school evokes for you. Do you have sweet or bitter memories? Does one particular year stand out? Why? Are your children or grandchildren going back soon? What is or was it like to accompany them on their very first day?”
Here is my contribution.
This week PoetryJam has as a theme “Back to School”:
“Think about what the first day of school evokes for you. Do you have sweet or bitter memories? Does one particular year stand out? Why? Are your children or grandchildren going back soon? What is or was it like to accompany them on their very first day?”
Here is my contribution.
First School Day
The first few
drops of rain
On sun-baked
soil have a special smell –
Turmeric mixed
with soft green moss,
And a freshness,
a vitality, an electricity,
The discharge of
a spark of static.
The first school
day
In a
newly-cleaned classroom has a special smell:
Freshly-sharpened
pencil (cedar), sharp ink,
And the subtler
aroma of new schoolbooks,
Wide-open on
desktops.
The walls full
of maps and posters
Strange
photographs, alphabet cards, art;
A brave new
world to explore,
A wondrous
adventure waiting to happen
And new friends
to share it with.
The wide-open
eyes, filling with images;
New sounds, new
tasks, a new order of things.
The crest-fallen
look of grim realisation
That you are not
alone and not-so-special anymore,
A rose unique
and solitary
Suddenly
immersed within an endless rose-garden…
The golden
afternoon, warm autumn sunshine,
And the walk
back home –
A young mind
bursting at the seams,
A blessed
fatigue of brain and body;
But all to be
made good simply, easily, quickly
With a glass of
milk and cookies…
your imagery sparks every nostalgic ray, have a nice Wednesday
ReplyDeletemuch love...
The first day of school always has a special smell wherever we are, doesn't it? I have memories of some first days but not of the very first though. I enjoyed reading about yours.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, the classroom does have a special smell at the beginning of the year. All desks are freshly sanitized, and the floor is scuff-free. I like the mention of the realization that one is not so special any more. There are others there...and one's voice has to compete with the voices of everyone else. And yes, milk and cookies are definitely a fitting end to a busy school day.
ReplyDelete"A rose unique and solitary / Suddenly immersed within an endless rose-garden…"...there's an element of wonderment here and a new realization dawning..what a beautiful imagery....
ReplyDeleteThe first day evokes such a keen awareness of the senses, and you have expressed so wonderfully, Nicholas!
ReplyDeleteah I like me some milk and cookies at the end of the day...so much new and possible at the beginning of school....and I feel that in your words....I like how you engaged all the senses in describing this...
ReplyDeleteWonderful painting of the beginning of school. I like the photo too--when little boys wore ties and girls wore dresses!
ReplyDeleteCharming photo.! Cookies? I don't think so:)
ReplyDeleteHomemade cookies, Rall, delicious! I can give you mum's recipe :-)
DeleteBeautifully evocative and nostalgic, Nicholas! I love the photo!
ReplyDeleteLoved the crest to trough of emotions... milk and cookies always made for a "happily ever after" ending to a day.
ReplyDeleteThe the wonderful school classroom image to the last word ~~ delightful.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem that recruits the senses of the reader to engage in that first day experience at school.
ReplyDeleteNice, nostalgic words...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem...
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