Saturday, 14 June 2025

LOST MUSIC

“Music is only love looking for words.” - Lawrence Durrell

This week,
Poets and Storytellers United has given the theme of “Music for the Muse”. I brought to mind the often repeated words that lovers say when “that” song begins to play: “They’re playing our song…” And they become starry-eyed. The song is significant for those two people and is laden with memories. Alas, sometimes those memories are quite sad, especially if the love affair has ended, one way or another…

Lost Music

You left me, without a bitter word being said
Taking flight in a hurried flurry like a bird;
My life all of the sudden empty, void,
A darkness and a pain I can’t avoid.

When you were gone all of the music died
Your absence grey, my life’s colour denied
In midst of summer, now cold and frost,
All joy and song and dance were lost

Our song now echoes in my empty heart,
How can I listen to it since we are apart?
The music was once tender, joyous, sweet,
But all I feel now is sadness and defeat.

The fates conspired and our love was crossed,
We gambled, with our stakes too high, we lost.
Where are you now that I need you most?
A hazy shadow, an elusive wispy ghost.

Memories, wakened by the music in my soul,
In fibres of my being run and consume me whole.
Music is the food of love, they rightly say,
And in your absence, no song will ever play.

Our song now echoes in my empty heart,
How can I listen to it since we are apart?
The music was once tender, joyous, sweet,
But all I feel now is sadness and defeat.

I couldn’t resist putting the words to music! Here’s the poem set to music and you can find all my music in my “
Otidorchestre” channel or listen to it on YouTube, SpotifyAmazon, Deezer, Flo, Pandora, and other music sharing sites.

7 comments:

  1. I think so many will relate to your poem in one way or another. Very emotive.

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  2. Yes, so true that the song that once brought joy can also bring sadness. Strange how the song doesn't know its impact like the cold rough wind passing through.

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  3. I got quite caught up in the feelings in this evocative poem. I guess we've all been there. And I love the sung version – what a gorgeous voice!

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  4. The last stanza of your beautifully composed poem were difficult for me to read ~ I lost the love of my life late last year and still cannot listen to the piece of music we considered "ours."

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  5. Sometimes powerful musical memories come from an important era in life, rather than from a shared love affair. This week I was singing club songs after the football matches ended, and remembered the words and tunes back from the 1956-60 era!
    Hels
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  6. A beautiful expression of love lost. sad and heartfelt. Will was right" If music be the food of love, play on, give me excess of it"

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  7. A very dark poem, sad. You told it well, I and many others have this story. Been 'ditched" twice, not pleasant.

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