“Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead.” – Oscar Wilde
I have been very busy working hard these past few weeks and hence have had little spare time that has to be apportioned very sparingly according to a strict set of priorities. Nevertheless, late at night behind the closed door of my study, when I can shut everyone and everything out, I allow myself a little latitude and I can take some time to be creative.
Here is a poem just written for the Poets United Midweek Motif challenge, which this week is all about “Space”.
To Let
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
Ever since you left,
A huge, echoing space the size of the universe
All enclosed in that small, fist-sized organ
Of shuddering flesh,
That is my empty heart.
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
Ever since you left,
I have been walking in there endlessly
And my footsteps echo hollow,
Each step taking great effort,
Each step leaving behind great pain.
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
It is very clean,
And quiet; warm in Winter, cool in Summer,
Of Northerly aspect – and the best of all,
It has a garden with great potential –
A little care will make it bloom.
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
Going cheaply –
In fact no money need change hands –
All that I need to fill it is sincerity,
Some affection, tenderness, understanding.
Love may enter as a sub-letter later.
Here is a poem just written for the Poets United Midweek Motif challenge, which this week is all about “Space”.
To Let
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
Ever since you left,
A huge, echoing space the size of the universe
All enclosed in that small, fist-sized organ
Of shuddering flesh,
That is my empty heart.
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
Ever since you left,
I have been walking in there endlessly
And my footsteps echo hollow,
Each step taking great effort,
Each step leaving behind great pain.
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
It is very clean,
And quiet; warm in Winter, cool in Summer,
Of Northerly aspect – and the best of all,
It has a garden with great potential –
A little care will make it bloom.
There is a space in my heart: To Let –
Going cheaply –
In fact no money need change hands –
All that I need to fill it is sincerity,
Some affection, tenderness, understanding.
Love may enter as a sub-letter later.
a clever use of 'to let' space here :)
ReplyDeleteWow! An advertisement I wish I had written. Perhaps by now, that space in me is filled with Light.
ReplyDelete"the size of the universe
All enclosed in that small, fist-sized organ
Of shuddering flesh . . ."
A very sweet poem Nicholas.You are going to be overwhelmed with applicants:)
ReplyDeleteA touching interpretation of space. You will have your share of tenants!
ReplyDeleteThis is very lovely. The repetition underscores the message wonderfully, and I love the garden with great potential.
ReplyDeleteSpace to Let and what a reasonable price. Luv it
ReplyDeleteHappy Wednesday
Much love...
Well done! I particularly like the first stanza.
ReplyDeleteThere is a space in my heart: To Let –
ReplyDeleteEver since you left,
I have been walking in there endlessly
And my footsteps echo hollow,
Each step taking great effort,
Each step leaving behind great pain.
These lines are soo beautiful... so evocative!!❤️
The best things in life are free, right? Your space is welcoming.
ReplyDeleteLovely writing.
I feel the enormity of that space and it makes me sad for I feel the same.
ReplyDeleteI feel strains of Poe here...a heart telling its tale, and that "To Let" almost becomes bloodletting, for me. This is a powerful piece.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amusing but sincere plea for love this is and a delightful read.
ReplyDeleteah, the empty space someone else can make inside us!
ReplyDeletewonderful and emotional.
This is brilliant,, Nicholas! Uniquely worded, and imaged.
ReplyDeleteIt has a garden with great potential –
ReplyDeleteA little care will make it bloom.
So much to look forward to if a heart is all open for a loved one!
Hank
When do we sign the lease? A lovely poem, Nicholas!
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