“I’ve looked at clouds from both sides now, From up and down, and still somehow, It’s cloud illusions I recall, I really don't know clouds at all.” – Joni Mitchell
Poetry Jam this week has set the theme of “clouds” as a springboard from which creative imaginations will leap into poetical expression. Here is my contribution:
The Cusp of Spring
On the cusp of Spring
With milky-brumy skies still wintry,
When evening falls early
Tinting the leaden clouds salmon-pink
When blue-violet hyacinths bloom,
Despite the bitter winds;
When rain falls and falls from grey-shrouded skies,
Making of the garden a forbidding place,
It is then that I want you most...
To clasp you close to my breast
As if you were a winter, hot-house rose,
Tall, slender, fragrant, snow-white;
To feel your ice-sharp thorns
Digging into my flesh, letting the ichor flow…
Poetry Jam this week has set the theme of “clouds” as a springboard from which creative imaginations will leap into poetical expression. Here is my contribution:
The Cusp of Spring
On the cusp of Spring
With milky-brumy skies still wintry,
When evening falls early
Tinting the leaden clouds salmon-pink
When blue-violet hyacinths bloom,
Despite the bitter winds;
When rain falls and falls from grey-shrouded skies,
Making of the garden a forbidding place,
It is then that I want you most...
To clasp you close to my breast
As if you were a winter, hot-house rose,
Tall, slender, fragrant, snow-white;
To feel your ice-sharp thorns
Digging into my flesh, letting the ichor flow…
My blood to dye your white petals crimson,
Warming the wintry night
With the blood-heat’s freshly spilt libation
Hastening Spring’s arrival.
love the spring / beloved as a deity here...beautiful...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Nicholas!
ReplyDeletei'm always amazed at the hues we see in clouds; have a nice Wednesday
ReplyDeletemuch love....
Lots of passion in this I think. Interesting that you put the Joni Mitchell song as it has been going through my head ever since I first saw the prompt! It had almost faded til I read it here and now it is back again!
ReplyDeleteWhite petals crimson - love this that image of life and hope. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteSalmon pink clouds would be beautiful! I am a bit envious of you heading now into spring instead of autumn. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteNothing like some clouds to make the sky more beautiful at sunrise or sunset. Enjoy spring, Nick!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem celebrating absolute love and the coming of spring!
ReplyDeleteMelancholy and bittersweet... Great write
ReplyDeleteLove that you took the "cloud" prompt in such a colorful direction. Wonderful writing!
ReplyDeleteI love that Joni MItchell song...competing now with Wendy's "Age of Aquarius" in my head!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful write. I love salmon-pink clouds - usually purple-gray edged.
I love this poem of yours, Nicholas. The two halves are different yet complement one another and it is a sad yet beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful images...a splendid word painting filled with passion and love.
ReplyDeleteTruly lovely Nicholas...so many wonderful images here. I can smell the flowers in the wind. :-)
ReplyDeleteMoving words of longing...
ReplyDeletenicely penned
ReplyDeleteBeyond Clouds
Your poem has a positivity, to look towards spring for revival, once the winter season has passed...The longing may have passed as well...
ReplyDeleteEileen
Interesting take on the prompt ... Nicely penned! :) I enjoyed reading this.
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