Mining the archives of old notebooks, I came across this poem written aeons ago. The memory of its writing is still fresh because it is associated with the piece of music that prompted its creation. It is the instrumental piece whose title is also serving as the title of the poem. It is by Greek singer-songwriter Georges Moustaki who became famous in France in the 1960s. This short guitar piece is a perfect little miniature and encapsulated at the time my feelings, which I hoped to express by writing this poem, vocalising the emotion implicit in the music.
Rue de Fossés Saint-Jacques
My loneliness, A silver needle in my heart, A wreath of flames on my head. My loneliness, A knot caught in my throat, stifling me, Poisoned bitter wine, On my lips killing me With every sip, repeatedly.
My loneliness, A guitar ringing out, (With the G slightly out of tune) In an empty room. My loneliness, A single bed, a white sheet Like a snow-covered frigid plain.
My loneliness, A promise that was never kept, Wasted words only, Taken like dead leaves by the wind. My loneliness, A salty tear and brumy eyes, Secret sighs in a dark room, The counting of hours until dawn.
My ex-husband who died last month introduced me to the wonderful music of Georges Moustaki. I've recently found some Moustaki records and CDs as I'm sorting through my ex's belongings. These I will surely keep. Thank you for this simple but lovely guitar video.
jeez you were a good poet even as a lad... beautiful imagery (as always). there is something very immediate about this poem. even though your blog tells us it was written a while ago the pain of this loneliness (as expressed in this poem) still feels very imeediate
Beautiful as usual. Having been told in your comment on Creative Journey I scrolled to the bottom and began the video so I could read the poem to its accompaniment. Delightful.
What beautiful music! It's interesting how the result of one creative process can act as the springboard for many more. Your poem is sad but lovely and is complimented by the music so much!
Thank you, everyone, for your comments. Bekkieann, Moustaki was intorduced to me by my parents when we were living in Greece. We had quite a big collection of French, Italian, Spanish and English records, as well as the standard Greek ones. When we came to Australia, these were left behind in Greece. It has been quite a process to try and recover some of those gems of the 60s. Advantage is they are now on CD.
Meredith and Kwika, the loneliness is certainly somehting that is not a problem now! However, at the time, it sometimes flet like the end of the world had come...
I have been blogging daily on this platform for several years now. It is surprising that I have persisted as the world is changing and "microblogging" is now the norm. I blog to amuse myself, make comment on current affairs, externalise some of my creativity, keep notes on things that interest me, learn something new and to surprise myself with things that I discover about this wonderful, and sometimes crazy, world we live in.
I sometimes get the impression that I am on a soapbox delivering a monologue, so your comments are welcome.
My ex-husband who died last month introduced me to the wonderful music of Georges Moustaki. I've recently found some Moustaki records and CDs as I'm sorting through my ex's belongings. These I will surely keep. Thank you for this simple but lovely guitar video.
ReplyDeletejeez you were a good poet even as a lad...
ReplyDeletebeautiful imagery (as always). there is something very immediate about this poem. even though your blog tells us it was written a while ago the pain of this loneliness (as expressed in this poem) still feels very imeediate
Beautiful as usual. Having been told in your comment on Creative Journey I scrolled to the bottom and began the video so I could read the poem to its accompaniment. Delightful.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful music! It's interesting how the result of one creative process can act as the springboard for many more. Your poem is sad but lovely and is complimented by the music so much!
ReplyDeleteThe words speak from your heart. I hope you aren't so lonely now.
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone, for your comments. Bekkieann, Moustaki was intorduced to me by my parents when we were living in Greece. We had quite a big collection of French, Italian, Spanish and English records, as well as the standard Greek ones. When we came to Australia, these were left behind in Greece. It has been quite a process to try and recover some of those gems of the 60s. Advantage is they are now on CD.
ReplyDeleteMeredith and Kwika, the loneliness is certainly somehting that is not a problem now! However, at the time, it sometimes flet like the end of the world had come...
Good idea, Jacqui!
Nice music and poem
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