“It is difficult to free fools from the chains they revere.” - Voltaire
A dark angel has been provided by Magpie Tales as the creative spark for all who will take up her challenge. Here is my offering:
Need to Fly
The wild flapping of feathered wings,
Caged and desperate to escape;
Cries in the night, powerless
To make the moon approach closer;
No amount of war paint can make you
Fearsome enough to overcome your foe.
Caged and desperate to escape;
Cries in the night, powerless
To make the moon approach closer;
No amount of war paint can make you
Fearsome enough to overcome your foe.
Memories of a distant flight,
Some place in the past;
The freedom of air rushing by you,
Caressing your every fibre;
No amount of struggle can make you
Break your chains and escape.
Some place in the past;
The freedom of air rushing by you,
Caressing your every fibre;
No amount of struggle can make you
Break your chains and escape.
The faint glimmer of sunlight
And visions of broken chips of blue sky;
Remembrances of green meadows,
Flowers: Do they still exist?
No amount of wishing can make you
Fly, liberated, untethered, free.
And visions of broken chips of blue sky;
Remembrances of green meadows,
Flowers: Do they still exist?
No amount of wishing can make you
Fly, liberated, untethered, free.
A gilded cage is still a cage,
Your every need taken care of
Is no guarantee of happiness;
A captive soul imprisons heart and flesh, too.
No amount of solid earth can make you
Forget the lightness of air…
Your every need taken care of
Is no guarantee of happiness;
A captive soul imprisons heart and flesh, too.
No amount of solid earth can make you
Forget the lightness of air…
This last stanza stands out as a cautionary message worth considering carefully ... well done. I also like the repetition of the two words of the fifth lines of each stanza ... nice carry through ...
ReplyDeleteI love the line 'no amount of war paint ....' Very nice.
ReplyDeleteExquisite poem on freedom!
ReplyDeleteadding voltaire was particularly nice
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write...strongly resonates with me...thank you...
ReplyDeleteI feel the confinement. And it makes my thoughts turn to the nature of the prison. BTW, I love that you increased the saturation of the photo!
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