“Many are stubborn in pursuit
of the path they have chosen, few in pursuit of the goal.” - FriedrichNietzsche
In the Midweek Motif this week, Poets United has the theme of “Path”. Contributors are requested to produce a poem that explores this theme.
In the Midweek Motif this week, Poets United has the theme of “Path”. Contributors are requested to produce a poem that explores this theme.
Here is my poem:
The Path
We make our own path in life
as we walk it,
And it will lead us where our
heart desires;
Once the first step is taken,
the die is cast
And we walk on until our lamp
expires.
We trudge through desert and
through jungle,
Our goal forever shining far
ahead;
It takes all of our courage,
strength, tenacity
To onward march, and firmly
tread.
The risks are many, dangers
lurk,
So many easier roads lead from
our goal away.
With purpose and determination
we choose
The rocky, winding path on
which we stay.
Many we’ll meet who try to
tempt us
With easy words, fool’s gold
and false rewards;
Our goal obscured, the forest
dark,
The night long, and yet we
march towards
What in our heart we know is
right and true.
We make our own path in life
as we walk it,
And what we hope is that at
its end
We find kindred spirits,
sister souls, our meed;
For in that blessed place,
eternity we’ll spend
And revel in a world all
bright and new.
Finding kindred spirits makes the trudge along the rocky path worth while. I enjoyed this poem.
ReplyDeletewalk on till our lamp expires... nicely said.
ReplyDeleteA poem pertinent to these difficult times we are living in. Our world is changing rapidly and there are many who want to mislead us and make us stray from our true path with promises of "fool's gold and false rewards". A rocky, difficult path that we forge through impassable terrain is the road of virtue and this is the one that we must follow to reap our "meed" (I had to look it up, but what a wonderful word!). Excellent write! Thank you, Nicholas.
ReplyDeleteeasier roads are great temptations indeed...kindred spirits inspire and true joys in this life adventure. ...very well put....
ReplyDeleteThis is such a wise and profound write. Indeed, we tend to weave our own path as we struggle through life and its difficulties.
ReplyDeleteHow lovely! The struggle of the path is clear here, but with a lilt that makes it more than tolerable. I believe I will whistle this tune and its images to help me through this day. Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteRight now I'm not sure I have either the strength or the courage to keep moving ahead, but your poem is pointing me in that direction...
ReplyDeleteI needed to feel hopeful today--thank you!
ReplyDeleteI think you have made some good points here, and I will take them into consideration. I like the idea that we make our own path as we walk it, that it wasn't there before we began to forge it.
ReplyDeleteIt is of course left to our own judgement whether to take to straight and narroww or the road less travelled. Neither are right or wrong it is how we react to them that is the important decision. What a great poem this is.
ReplyDeleteMuch truth and wisdom in this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words of wisdom.
ReplyDeleteWe being are lucky to choose our path .
This fredom of choice brings lots of responsibility.
Responsibility to survive this journey with grace and dignity and to remove thorns from it to make it easy for others
Beautiful words of wisdom.
ReplyDeleteWe being are lucky to choose our path .
This fredom of choice brings lots of responsibility.
Responsibility to survive this journey with grace and dignity and to remove thorns from it to make it easy for others
Love this poem, Nicholas. A line that really touched me is, 'and we walk on until our lamp expires.' such a soft phrase.
ReplyDeleteA very philosophical poem with a lot of wisdom and yes we do need to meet kindred spirits and sister souls
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