“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.” - Laozi
This week, the Poets and Storytellers has given the theme of 14 Words for Love. I have used the 14 words from Shakespeare’s “Romeo and Juliet”: “Parting is such sweet sorrow, so I shall say goodnight till it be morrow…” as the springboard for my poem.
Parting’s Sweet Sorrow
“Parting is such sweet sorrow
That I shall say goodnight till it be morrow.”
The moon alarmed has hid behind a cloud,
The wind is whistling and the rain will fall.
And in my room my restless breath heard loud;
My solitude a gnawing pain, a soft grey pall,
A deadening fog, an empty echoing hall.
You write to me as you roam and sail the seas,
The words of love a hollow echo of your voice.
And in my empty room my heartbeats freeze
As your insistent absence will not let me rejoice;
I have to cope, there is no other choice.
The yellow autumn leaves swirl in the blowing wind
The rain now falls in sheets, the street deserted, void.
Sleep will not come to me, my mind to you is pinned,
Thoughts of your face, your touch, your voice I can’t avoid;
I wish that your departure I could rescind.
Time flows unctuously through the sleepless night
The curtain pulled back allows the street light entry.
The rain, the hidden moon, the sickly yellow light:
My only companions, my loneliness the faithful sentry.
When you are absent all my nights are white.
“Parting is such sweet sorrow
That I shall say goodnight till it be morrow.”
The poem is set to music again, and you can find all my music in my “Otidorchestre” channel or listen to it on YouTube, Spotify, Amazon, Deezer, Flo, Pandora, and other music sharing sites.
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10 hours ago
A passionate piece. I like and do ponder the thought of loneliness being a companion.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Penelope.
DeleteYour beautiful love poem and song bear testament to the Shakespeare quote "Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs; Being vexed, a sea nourished with lovers' tears." from Romeo and Juliet. Bet the Bard would have loved this one....Wonderful !
ReplyDeleteAh, yes, Rall, the Bard had something to say about everything and I am always inspired by him.
DeleteWe can always count on you for gorgeous love poems, and gorgeous music to go with them. This was such a treat to listen to! And that was a neat way of incorporating 14 words. (But hey, mate, this prompt came from Poets and Storytellers United! (And indeed your link does lead to us.))
ReplyDeleteOuch! Used up my senior's moment for the month. Thanks Rosemary!
DeleteMusic and lyrics ~~ you "do" have a way with them!!! This is a beauty.
ReplyDeleteThank you kindly, Helen!
DeleteBeautifully written I love it and again the song is haunting What a beautiful voice.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Marja!
DeleteI love how you have described so eloquently the feelings of love - reflected them back to nature and all its dilemmas - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jae!
DeleteAh, young love! Who needs to come in out of the soft summer rain! Very evocative.
ReplyDeleteYes, Priscilla, it's always a godo idea to travel back and think of our first love - whether it was good or bad. It definitely taught us something.
Delete...And we in the US MUST support Secretary Kennedy, despite (unfounded) fears that he's going to cut off anyone's access to whatever vaccines they want, IF ONLY because he's working to ban the kind of disgusting ads I couldn't avoid seeing/hearing before the music started. The singer has a lovely voice though.
ReplyDeleteI am constantly mystified by the changes that are being allowed to happen in the USA, without any check or reaction. It definitely sounds like it is now a different country from that I visited several times in the past. During all those visits as a tourist and for various academic matters, I was welcomed and made to feel at home!
DeleteThe sorrow and joy of love
ReplyDeleteIndeed, thank you.
DeleteTouching!
ReplyDeleteStunning poem, Nick! The music pulls at the heartstrings with a beautiful voice.
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