Friday, 12 September 2025

PARTING'S SWEET SORROW

“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.” - Laozi

This week, the
Poets and Storytellers  has given the theme of 14 Words for Love. I have used the 14 words from Shakespeare’s “Romeo and Juliet”: “Parting is such sweet sorrow, so I shall say goodnight till it be morrow…” as the springboard for my poem.

Parting’s Sweet Sorrow

“Parting is such sweet sorrow
That I shall say goodnight till it be morrow.”

The moon alarmed has hid behind a cloud,
The wind is whistling and the rain will fall.
And in my room my restless breath heard loud;
My solitude a gnawing pain, a soft grey pall,
A deadening fog, an empty echoing hall.

You write to me as you roam and sail the seas,
The words of love a hollow echo of your voice.
And in my empty room my heartbeats freeze
As your insistent absence will not let me rejoice;
I have to cope, there is no other choice.

The yellow autumn leaves swirl in the blowing wind
The rain now falls in sheets, the street deserted, void.
Sleep will not come to me, my mind to you is pinned,
Thoughts of your face, your touch, your voice I can’t avoid;
I wish that your departure I could rescind.

Time flows unctuously through the sleepless night
The curtain pulled back allows the street light entry.
The rain, the hidden moon, the sickly yellow light:
My only companions, my loneliness the faithful sentry.
When you are absent all my nights are white.

“Parting is such sweet sorrow
That I shall say goodnight till it be morrow.”

The poem is set to music again, and you can find all my music in my “
Otidorchestre” channel or listen to it on YouTube, Spotify,  Amazon, Deezer, Flo, Pandora, and other music sharing sites.

6 comments:

  1. A passionate piece. I like and do ponder the thought of loneliness being a companion.

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  2. Your beautiful love poem and song bear testament to the Shakespeare quote "Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs; Being vexed, a sea nourished with lovers' tears." from Romeo and Juliet. Bet the Bard would have loved this one....Wonderful !

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  3. We can always count on you for gorgeous love poems, and gorgeous music to go with them. This was such a treat to listen to! And that was a neat way of incorporating 14 words. (But hey, mate, this prompt came from Poets and Storytellers United! (And indeed your link does lead to us.))

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    1. Ouch! Used up my senior's moment for the month. Thanks Rosemary!

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  4. Music and lyrics ~~ you "do" have a way with them!!! This is a beauty.

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  5. Beautifully written I love it and again the song is haunting What a beautiful voice.

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